Wednesday, 21 October 2015

My holiday story

Waiting patiently in line for 5 seconds now 10 second now 20 now 30. How long do these thing take to make I said to myself. Finally the woman stepped away with her….

Big delicious looking ICE CREAM !!! I could almost taste its coldness sliding down my throat like a snake.

Now my turn. May I please have one big delicious chocolate monster with chocolate sprinkles and sauce PLEASE !!!!!

Man that thing was big.

That was one big delicious monster. But it was not furry witch was good.


  1. Hi Ebony
    I like your story and i like how you said it was lake a big monster

  2. Hey Ebony. I liked how you personified the ice cream as a monster. Come check out my blog sometime.