Thursday 8 May 2014

The spooky maze

Stomp stomp I threw my token in to the box. I stepped onto the green gloomy stair case. I felt like I was a ghost. I pulled open the door creeeeek went the door. I walked up the path crash crash went the stones. I read the sign with red paint all over it, it said walk do not run. Twit-twoo it was the sound of an owl, that creeped  me out!

I ran as fast as I could it was an dead end. I ran down the other side and went around and  around the coner there was three more paths. This time the one I took was not a dead end.so I carried on down the path

I kept going around in circles until I found the way through I went up the stairs that took for ever. I went down the bumpy slide it was cool fun. this was my experience at the big rock fun park in taupo.

3 comments:

  1. Great language features

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  2. nice story.Make sure you go threw your post. nice langue features.

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  3. Good job gypsy

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